Paperweight - My Webcomic (Help?)

[Zephik]

UPDATED:

ORIGINAL:
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/640...t020609bt7.png

As you can see, its not quite finished just yet. The reason is because GIMP keeps malfunctioning on me and closing whenever I try to do anything to the image. :/

So if someone could put in some final touches for me, that would be awesome! I'm not really sure what I had planned, I was just winging it as I went along to be honest. But the characters were drawn in MS Paint and its pretty obvious, so thats pretty much all I was going to do from what you see now (draw over the characters outlines with GIMPS paint brush tool is what I had in mind). Anyways, other than that you can add whatever you think looks good. Maybe color them or something, idk.

Just out of curiosity; My comic - Funny? Not so much? Somewhere in between? Don't worry about being nice just out of pity lol. It made my family and friends laugh, so I don't really care what a bunch of nerds on the internet think. (btw - you guys are the coolest geeks and nerds I know. I mean, you would have to be right? Modders !> regular nerds) :-p

BTW I'm aware that I drew it in a Cyanide and Happiness format. You can only be so original with these things you know! :-P Draw square bodies and its C&H, draw round bodies and its XKCD. Doesn't leave much room to be original so I just decided to go with a C&H format. Maybe they'll use it? lol

[danthegeek]

I did a little playing around. Im interested to see what other come up with.
-Dan

[Omega]

XKCD doesn't use round bodies, they use stick figures with round heads.

[FuzzyPlushroom]

Maybe they'll use it?

It's got the "funny" down, but it's not nearly offensive enough.

I like it, though.

[Zephik]

Updated! See original post.

**PICTURE**

I did a little playing around. Im interested to see what other come up with.
-Dan

Dang, thats awesome! My Gimp-Foo is horrible. haha

XKCD doesn't use round bodies, they use stick figures with round heads.

You're totally right. I don't know what the heck I was thinking! I think its C&H that also does round bodies, depending on the artist.

It's got the "funny" down, but it's not nearly offensive enough.

I like it, though.

Scene 4:
"Woah! Can I touch it!?"

Scene 5:
[blank stare]

Scene 6:
[guy laying on the ground in a pool of blood with bloodied rock laying next to him]

[DaveW]

Haha, it's got something. It's lacking polish but I think you have potential. If I were you, I'd find a collaborator. Most of the webcomics have a someone who comes up with the gags and draws the comic, and someone else who does the colouring.

Good luck mate!

-Dave

[Zephik]

[Omega]

Scene 4:
"Woah! Can I touch it!?"

Scene 5:
[blank stare]

Scene 6:
[guy laying on the ground in a pool of blood with bloodied rock laying next to him]

I was thinking:

Scene 6:
[character with the rock unzips his pants]

[The boy 4rm oz]

Reminds me of "Cyanide and Happiness" a lot, I know you already said that but I couldn't resit .